I was maintaining a Git repository that mirrored the embedded CLFS book's master and my own changes on github but I've now got my own repo on the actual CLFS server. If you'd like to follow it, feel free.
Clone the book from my repo:
$ git clone git://git.cross-lfs.org/abradford/clfs-embedded.git
Build instructions to make the book into HTML and other formats are included. For the impatient, create the HTML version:
$ make BASEDIR=[where you want them to go]
Check out the main CLFS page and participate on the mailing lists if you have issues.
EDIT: If you'd like to simply browse my repo via a webbrowser, check out: